An old piece of fiction
Tuesday, November 17, 2015I found an old piece of writing on my Dropbox that I wrote back in 2010. It was for an assignment at University. There is more, but I didn't feel like posting the whole lot at once. I like to think my writing has improved a little over the last few years. Enjoy.
Bees buzzed in the clumps of wild
flowers by the dirt road, making the air clouded with noise. The smell of
jasmine was heavy, mixing with the scent of cooking coming from the huts on the
hill. Sparrows sung in the branches of the trees laden with blossom and wood
pigeons flew from field to tree transporting materials to build nests. Yellow
flowers grew plentiful across the rolling hills.
The tree he sat
in was one of the tallest, he could see across the fields as far as the river
at the bottom. He could see the huts he called home with goats grazing lazily
on the dry grass. He watched as a ladybird landed on his stomach, tickling him
with its tiny feet as it strolled towards his bellybutton and rested there for
a while.
‘Jason! Where
are you?’ his mothers voice pierced the natural silence and he turned over on
his front- careful to brush the ladybird off him first- so he could see her
through the branches. Resting his chin on his hand, he watched his mother stand
with her hands on her hips, looking out towards the yellow field.
‘Up here.’
Jason called.
A goat came to
nuzzle at her waist, absentmindedly she brought a hand down and began stroking
its nose. ‘Mike will be back soon. Come down please.’
Jason frowned; he didn’t want to see his brother
yet. He knew he would come back with exciting stories of who he had met and
what he had bargained to get sugar. Maybe he would come back with oil- then
Jason would never be able to hear the end of how wonderful he was.
Jason wrapped
his legs around the knotted branch and slid off until he was hanging upside
down in the air by his knees. He hung there, feeling the blood pound in his
ears. A cool wind rustled the flowers and the fronds on the roof of the
cottages. Jason shivered. He grabbed the branch and lowered himself to the
bleached grass. It crackled between his toes as he felt the warmth from the
earth travel to the soles of his feet.
At that moment,
the sounds of hooves on the dirt road reached the village and the villagers
came out to greet the travellers. Jason hung back, kicking a stone.
His brother was
at the head, jumping down before the horse had halted to embrace his mother. They had been gone three days and no one had been sure whether they would come
back.
The
city was a dangerous place. It was necessary to visit to get the supplies they
couldn’t grow themselves. There were gangs with guns who would do anything for
sugar, coal and cooking oil. Buildings lay in ruin; grass grew through the
potholed tarmac and vines pulled down lampposts. It was much hotter in the
city, the sun reflected a thousand times in the shattered glass and black
tarmac. It was a different world than the one Jason was used to.
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